All Comments on 'Lemons into Unexpected Lemonade'

by Syra_pan

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Elaine_MatureElaine_Matureover 1 year ago

Pacing is everything. You did that masterfully. Her growing comfort with what she did and what she was, evolved beautifully.

Thank you for your writing!

lexlogan8lexlogan8over 1 year ago

Loved it! Agree with Elaine on everything. Hope you are inspired to write more!

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I am only here for roleplay. Who I really am will not be shared. I like exploration, the slow burn, the slow reveal, and hesitation. The contemplation of consent and the a gradual growing willingness to cross lines is often my focus. I also love the visual, trying to paint...