All Comments on 'Lena and her Master Ch. 02'

good story.i hope your chapters get longer.

She sees this guy once, in a sex store, barely makes contact with him, right? But he slipped her his phone number and she calls him. And, over the phone, during their initial conversation, she becomes his slave? I don't think so!

A life transition like this takes months, or at least weeks, no matter how deep-down convinced she is that she wants a M/s relationship. There would be scads of interaction before she would ever contemplate moving out of her parents home and into his. If you want to just jump in to the action, then do it. But if you want to tell a story, and lay the groundwork for the action, then it must be done believably.

Very promising debut. I am checking back!

I'm gonna be back to see how this story develops

SS ;)

But completely unrealistic.

Why would an experienced Dom go over all rules and acceptance without a face to face meeting or trail weekend?