All Comments on 'Lena's New Life Ch. 09'

by toomuchinmyhead

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LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 12 years ago
A nice story

Kinda like her request of him at the beginning...a lot of sex, a little kinky and very loving. Pity the Red Bull didn't work so he could watch her final episode. Not what I'm used to (or admire) in the LIT genre of LW, more of a retro loving wife, but fine nonetheless. Only quibble is that he might not have been that patient the next morning given the Blue treatment he was fed the night before. On the editing side, I would have preferred a little more of them conversing in order to carry the story.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Story shows that there are not too much brains in your head.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great romantic story telling exemplifies this chapter, although it could have had a little more of a build-up at the beginning. Five stars.

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