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All Comments on 'Leo and the Seventh Ruin Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good start. Looking forward to reading this series.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I like where this is going. Find an editor. Sometimes we write so fast that what we wanted to say is not quite what's on the page. I knew what you meant to say but for some it's distracting. I really liked your little twist at the end. I hope to read more of your tale. Honestly, good work.

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