All Comments on 'Leofric and Godiva Pt. 06'

Come and Cum are two different words otherwise well done.

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Cheers

Thanks, Harga! Errors aside, I try to use come as a verb for orgasm, and cum as the noun/product of orgasm - a.k.a. the sticky fluid of happiness! What are your thoughts on the matter?

I'm a bit disappointed how rhis story is going. I had loved the story until this chapter. You turned her into mindless babble at the sight of a good looking man. She didn't seem like the type who would appreciate being exposed during intimate moments.

I'm sorry to hear it Anon. I decided to have a little fun with the fact that Cnut was described as the finest and most handsome of men in the literature of the time (aside from having a long nose, apparently) but I could see how it could land strangely for you. Sorry to disappoint - I hope to do better with the next, if you keep reading, that is.

Oh - and thanks! I appreciate that you told me what didn't work for you in a way that was constructive. It can be hard to do - especially when it feels like someone is messing up a story you liked.

Thank you for being receptive of my comments. I can understand your motives lol. I will continue to read and hope it gets back its old charm. I look forward to more.

This is such a charming series! Hot, funny, compelling all rolled into one. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I look forward to seeing where it goes next.

Thanks PQ! I have to admit, I'm struggling with the end. Everything keeps getting more and more ridiculous, which is funny, but it stretches credibility beyond reason. Then, I erase 2/3 of what I wrote and try to start again from a saner passage.

More Leofric please

Anonymous - I'm working on it. I want it to be good and the resolution keeps changing on me. Thanks for letting me know you care.