All Comments on 'Lesbian Blackmail Sex'

it was written good, and it does not pay to hit a BMW with no insurance, and being drunk at the same time, still I am sure she could have come up with a better way to settle the debt.

I love that story, now with more rigors; she'll be able to do an obedient bitch that will bring her other young girls to be introduced to lesbian sex. I give 5 stars and wait for the second parts.

Sorry for my English i'am french.

This total garbage.

Donna was on her like a fucking animal, Jesus. Couldn't finish this... I think it was all a little too fast, too... weird? (why is she sticking her tongue in ear canals?) for me... If I look at this objectively, I find the part I did read pretty funny, what with how Donna was going at her so, uh, ferociously

But you need to proof read alittle better. Hope you continue the series, it's right up my ally.

I enjoyed reading it the story line is hot.

My advise would be to use an editor, it would make a good story better

My kind of story, this is what erotic writing is about. Five atars

It was like reading a story from a fifth grade boy whose only sexual knowledge came from other boys on the playground.

I couldn't decide if her name was Cory, or Corey. Whatever her name blackmail was only one crime. How about rape? Like others have said, a good proof reader/editor would help. If this story isn't beyond help.

Excellent story. Had me masturbating throughout can't wait for part 2.

Cory was having a hard time EXCEPTING (I think you mean ACCEPTING) the fact that she was being turned on by another woman.