All Comments on 'Lesbian Blackmail Sex'

Cory was having a hard time EXCEPTING (I think you mean ACCEPTING) the fact that she was being turned on by another woman.

Excellent story. Had me masturbating throughout can't wait for part 2.

I couldn't decide if her name was Cory, or Corey. Whatever her name blackmail was only one crime. How about rape? Like others have said, a good proof reader/editor would help. If this story isn't beyond help.

It was like reading a story from a fifth grade boy whose only sexual knowledge came from other boys on the playground.

My kind of story, this is what erotic writing is about. Five atars

I enjoyed reading it the story line is hot.

My advise would be to use an editor, it would make a good story better

But you need to proof read alittle better. Hope you continue the series, it's right up my ally.

Donna was on her like a fucking animal, Jesus. Couldn't finish this... I think it was all a little too fast, too... weird? (why is she sticking her tongue in ear canals?) for me... If I look at this objectively, I find the part I did read pretty funny, what with how Donna was going at her so, uh, ferociously

This total garbage.

I love that story, now with more rigors; she'll be able to do an obedient bitch that will bring her other young girls to be introduced to lesbian sex. I give 5 stars and wait for the second parts.

Sorry for my English i'am french.

it was written good, and it does not pay to hit a BMW with no insurance, and being drunk at the same time, still I am sure she could have come up with a better way to settle the debt.