by silkstockingslover
Like this one a lot..not that much into the incest..Wish you would do some tit torture on the MILFs
Would be nice to see Bree meet up with the dom from decunstructing the professor. Always felt that would be a good Victoria vs Olivia type match up
I am totally drunk on cunt juice and want still more, never get enough.need fresh cunt every other day and an orgy every week end. Sex maniac cunt lapper, Lanc,s UK
Love the Bree stories. You have a talent for writing stories like Bree does for spotting submissive lesbians. BRAVO!
I recently discovered your stories, and am making my way through them. I especially like the ones in this series, although i haven't finished them all, much less your entire collection. I do have one complaint. Well not really a complaint. More an observation or request. When i read a story for anyone i'm one of those odd people who reads all the comments too. While most of your comments are favorable, the ones that do complain seem to say a lot that your stories are all the same. I disagree. Yes lesbian seduction is a common theme, but i feel you do a good job mixing things up and making different scenarios to keep things fresh. Maybe they seem to think this for a perceived notion though. Which is this. Have you ever noticed you repeat many of the same phrases? In most of your stories the domme will 'roar' at someone, someone will say 'challenge accepted', the mistress will command 'knees', and someone will exclaim 'delicious'. It seems i read somewhere you were a teacher. Maybe your biography or maybe one of your stories. Can't remember. But if that is correct, maybe you could break out the thesaurus and mix up your words a little. Instead of just 'knees' you could say 'get on your knees' or 'kneel down', something different. I know, that's a little nitpicky, but it does get repetetive sometimes. I keep thinking, didn't i just read this story. Plus, there's not much else to find wrong with your tales. They really are good. Thanks for listening. Gotta get back to your stories now.
Hey slikstockinglover. I have just recently found your story list here on Literotica. You write very well, so much so that this entire Bree series could be used as a format for a movie. I don't know who should play Bree, but I think that Madelenine St. Michaels would be perfect for the roll as the MILF. Keep up with the good writing, while I'll keep "up" with the reading. Looking forward to your next series.
Thought you hinted at turning the tables on Dom Mom. And what is the relationship with the Gov. And this family of Dom's?? Ideas for further stories or is that another series I may have missed?!
Madam Jasmine, as usual this story is also very hot and the story narration is very erotic.
i have read a few other authors stories, yours are the best. would like to be your friend.
Joe aka MRLAPPIT
Beyond insanity, Jas! Shakespeare, Tolstoy, Cervantes are merely kids compared to this masterpiece. Wondering, how good Deconstructing the Professor is, after this one.
316. I really like girl on girl, but your stories take it to the maximum. However, Bree is a little overbearing, I think. No matter- I’ll keep reading if you keep writing.