by Seductivebeast
Good Story but ended a little too fast. Take more time with the sex scene. Describe in Detail what is happening. Take your time.
I see that seduction is now a euphemism for rape and extortion. What happens if Tina throws her sister under the bus and goes to the police, explaining that her co-worker is threatening to release humiliating photos that were obtained without a written agreement. Mary is going to jail. Victims of blackmail should always call the bluff of their extortionist.
Any self-respecting lawyer could turn the French woman's statement into a pretzel.