All Comments on 'Lesbian Seduction at Summer Camp'

Great writing,keep it going.

I've read this before. I kept the address because i thought it was hot. It was right here:

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-lesbian-summer-camp-pt-01?page=10

It's gone now.

That was an amazing read. You do character development well, you drew me into caring and wanting to know more about the main characters and see how events unrolled. I have to say that it ended not as I imagined, it seemed a touch rushed and left a lot hanging almost as if there's to be a part two.

I almost started the review with "God Damn" in all of the most positive aspects of that phrase, a very hot, very well written story. The only down side is that now I'm going to have to delve into your other posts. But that's a cross I'll carry happily. Thank you for taking the time to write and share your stories.

Please, we need a part two.

WOW oh WOW! awesome. Did not end the way I thought it would not sure what that is though. There was character rolls left hanging so I hope we are in for another chapter.

Pappasleaze!

Beautiful story

More chapters please!

Really great read. Maybe a sequel however it's good to use our imagination.

Thank you for your efforts.

Loved the story. Very well written and I do love authors who concentrate on the characters and story line more, or as much, as the sexual content.

A story that showed so much promise at the beginning, with really interesting people being interduced. All of which fell into a quick finish in the last two pages , destroying the build up of the story and leaving us (the readers) at sea without the boat.

Please finish the story lines.

The first 9 pages were amazing. A bit rushed to a finish in the last 2. There’s so much more to go with this as you set it up really well

I can't believe you still have us waiting! Is that fair?

I loved the way you introduced your characters. Well written but the ending was abrupt. I hope you will have a continuation involving some of the other girls, maybe Tara and Shea exploring their new found pleasures. Maybe a continuation of Jess and what happens to her. It was a great read and thank for posting.

Beautiful story, lovely characters, great partially-developed interpersonal dynamics and conflicts, but needs much more to carry these to some kind of conclusion. I could offer a list, but I am sure they are already in your mind and other, more sensitive areas. Pick a thread to follow, then a second, maybe a third, and see how they converge or diverge moving forward. What you have done is very good; you have created an erotic whirlwind. Help your readers enter it and be awed.

Loved the story. I wish there were more chapters.