All Comments on 'Lesbian Slut Camp'

Can you at least put a warning on the story? This is not consensual. This is rape. SO PUT IT IN THE CORRECT CATEGORY!(Non-consesual) FFS.......

This was really hot, I enjoyed the way you played with gender and the mind control aspect, I suggest letting yourself move a bit slower, especially towards the end, as the pacing was a little awkward, I also suggest putting the mtf angle in the tags, as there is a huge audience for that sort of thing

This is a GREAT story and I loved to hear more!

Sorry, but that was just awful. Emotionless, dry, not the least bit erotic. Tina did this, Tina did that, Mary did this, Mary did that, George did this, George did that. About as cold and impersonal as it could be. Fortunately, it was short, not much wasted time.