All Comments on 'Lesbian Vampire Ch. 00-01'

I really enjoyed it and would love to see more

This defo needs a better name than Lesbian Vampire. Very hard to comment about this story just yet but interested to continue reading more.

Added you to faves so I won’t miss the next chapter. I love vampire stories! It’s not perfect but it’s a good story! Wish you’d fill out at least some of your profile tho. I look at that before reading anything and I often skip authors who leave it blank. Just me tho. Keep writing please:)

This is good. Like your writing style generally, and how sexy the dream encounter was, sign me up for more. Good enough to deserve a better title, but I don't care whar it's called if you follow up ;)

Very intriguing start and nice character intro. I for one enjoy vampire stories. Look forward to see where you take us.

I,finally started this after seeing chapter three dropped. Better than I expected , i'llchurn through the next two. Interesting story and characters. Reasonably well edited, but could have benefited from another set of eyes here and there.

Intriguing plot, looking foward to how you'll develop the characters and their world. Need to do a better job in editing/proofreading, maybe gets another pair, or two, of eyes-on. The few glaringly bad edits really break the flow and pull the reader out of the web your endeavoring to weave. Characters show real potential as does the developing mythos you've started here. Interested to see how you chose to play this out. Keep up the good work

LOVE your writing.