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This is the start of a series of stories about Jessica Allen. A young woman who finds out that she is a lesbian and finds love with other women.

A bit rushed.

First lust, then passion, then desire... yes, that's it!

Some of the turns of phrase are a little bit awkward, but overall it's a fine little scene.

I have left the comments open to all and will continue to do so. However, I must comment myself and say the if you do not like my stories if you want to criticises them fair enough but you do not have to both bite and tear at my flesh in doing so... I write from the UK United Kingdom perspective and use UK spelling and grammar. I have made accommodation for USA style and content. But It is not fair to critique my stories or quite so personal in the criticism of me... Please comment use some common courtesy when doing so. You do not need to be so cruel and cutting in your comments.