All Comments on 'Lesson 01: Sucking Cock'

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DakotaJayneDakotaJaynealmost 9 years ago
Great Job

I really enjoyed this story, I felt like you have enough information on the characters to show the development during play time.

I hope there's more to come, this was hot.

It did take me by surprise that she (the main character) said he was so hesitant to being a Dom and then he took it so well. But it was satisfying.

Really great job.

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