All Comments on 'Lessons from My Piano Teacher'

Very erotic. Expertly paced. I loved it.

Romantic, relatable characterisation, plausible dialogue, a slow build and an erotic denouement, what's not to love?

A wonderful, uplifting story and splendid debut. I look forward to reading more, and wish I were your piano teacher.

this is so fantastic, slow burn build ups like this are so underrated and I adore the dynamic between these two. god this was fantastic, maybe I should go take up piano lessons

This was brilliant x

Oooh I love this story

It is so erotic!

Your way of writing makes me experience it myself

Thanks for that! I’ve had a slow flirty build up like this with a stupidly handsome piano playing singer songwriter. It was clear we were both into the power play, but it was completely inappropriate. He’s 20 years older than me and a notorious player. I’m the good girl. He didn’t want to sully me, and I’m not into casual sex. Nothing ever came to fruition but the situation definitely conjured up some epic fantasies.

Loved this, and sad to see this is your only story so far - I hope to see more from you! You’re a great writer and I enjoyed the gentle BDSM and the way Penelope thought about being taken care of by someone more organised.

God damn…I’ve been reading on this sight but this is the first time my heart was touched my a story. The build up, the sweetness and her submission. Beside he is dominating but not an asshole, wish there was more story like this.

So cool and sexy, that's a great story, I love it...

Beautiful story. Exactly right. Definitely the dream of many women.

This story was good, engaging, and arousing. But ...

It could have been a perfect D/s story if you hadn't rushed the ending.

When she asked him to stay, he would have gently, but insistently told her, "No, not yet". He would have let her know she had to earn more from him, with more practice. That she needed to demonstrate a commitment to loyalty, honesty, and kindness. With obedience.

He would have done so for her benefit, as well as for himself. She would have wanted to show him that she would continue to be his good girl.

He would have wanted to compose and perform a classical romance duet with her. He would have wanted the two musicians to interplay with one another before finally and inevitably falling in love. She would have wanted no less than to fulfill her part, taught by him. Harmony, counterpoint, crescendo.

This story deserved one more chapter.

You should consider a revision.