by M8dOvGlaz
The mistress of cliffhangers did it again: Granting us another glimpse into the head and heart of Brinna and her curriculum to instruct Zach to master the art of lovemaking. I can almost feel their anticipation about their next meeting.
Really looking forward to 'next week's' edition.
Thanks for a hot scene from the book of love with just the right amount of words.
I like Brinna and Zach, brought to erotic life in a wonderful way by the author.
There is a beautiful balance of almost scientific curiosity, honest and unashamed lust, and friendship.
And there are small details of observation that are hard to find in erotic writing - they almost go unnoticed, yet will touch any reader who has ever had a glimpse of the joy that Brinna and Zach explore.
I m looking forward to following them as they explore.
Nice continuation of Zach's and Brinna's story. : )
( I decided to go with a pun-ny reference for the header for this Comment.)
E./"nycreader" in (well) New York City.
I enjoyed your piece very much. Certainly well done. Hope you keep writing and adding more to this story. Can't wait.
I won't blow it for anyone else, lets just say that was the most insanely pleasurable erotica I've read in a long, long time.