All Comments on 'Let Down Ch. 01'

by tromboner

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oldwayneoldwaynealmost 16 years ago
A Fine Tale!

Why don't you give us more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
meh...

seemed a little rushed...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Liked it, but was hoping for more of a build up

The seduction is what builds anticipation

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fabulous Story

I can relate. Both my sister and I had come home from disappointing dates and decided we could do each other more good than our dates would ever do. As time went by the frequency of our encounters increased until we felt like the two of us were a couple. It stopped when I went off to college far away and she found she liked dating a different guy each week. I gave you 5 stars because that was all I am allowed to give you.

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