All Comments on 'Let Me Help You'

She's not very innocent if she's willing to do all that.

Good premise.

But rushed. Too rushed.

Needs step-by-step details, not just step 1 and then step 10.

No real nervousness. No real reluctance that needed to be overcome.

He asks he to take off her tip and show her breasts. Boom. Done. No convincing needed?

Off comes her bottom. One touch of her clit through her panties and off comes her panties.

Boom. She has an orgasm.

Boom. Her mouth is on his cock.

No 'helpful hints' about what she should do? No wonderment about his hard cock? No simply touching it to feel it?

Three stars. And that's generous.

OK, that got my dick hard.

Very nice

I want to post a public reply to one of the Anonymous commenters - Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'm used to writing quick one shots on Wattpad, all of my published stories were there originally. I'm going to work on making the stories longer if I write in the future!

to all the girls out there still virgin, never let aboy inside you for first time without protection. you all are so unbelivably tight. and boys get some sense dude, it is aplace you wont last until you are veteran