by Myanlass
"Wow, this is how it feel," I truly felt my body cringe as well. I enjoyed this chapter, the Nik-Dominique parts especially. I'm not going to lie though, I did skim through some of the chapter, like the dinner scene with Aunt Crystal and Nik's brother. I'm glad the Jason confrontation wasn't drawn out but rather short and straight to the point, A+.
I also enjoyed the ending, very ambiguous, I mean of course Nik and Dominique are getting together eventually, but is he still as hurt as before when he warned her about being too late? is she still confused? Mmh hmm, very interesting stuff. Good job, excited for the next chapter.
So hope the next chapter is soon because I don't want to spend so much time throwing books at Dom telling her how dumb she is being right now. Thanks
Fantastic update. Really hope to see the next update soon. The writing is excellent, you've really brought these characters to life. I almost felt like a voyeur in that last love making scene. Short but intense and effective. Where does Giovanni fit in all of a sudden. I hope he's not for Gale as I've been preparing for Gale and Patrick's story. Excellent work. Keep it up
FANTASTIC - PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON, I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!! THANKS X
Hi, I'm a 46 year old male, ... but I'm admitting it: I loved the Scott and Katrina story and do love this, ... So PLEASE: give Dom a shove and a push and us readers a happy everafter, ... per favore, ... grazie
It is time Dominque better tell that man she love him. It was so funny when she couldnt at first say the words but finally told her it was nice and that toast was great.
gives the guy a break soon. For a psychiatrist, she isn't at all in touch with her own emotions, feelings or general psyche. It's taking her ages to realize that she loves Nik. I hope she sorts herself out soon.
you took your sweet time. i hope you will update this the soonest. do not make us wait for months on end pleaseeeeee...
finish this...and finish this fast!!!! :)
i am glad you never lost your touch. :)
Ok I have read this story non stop and would love to know how it ends. Pleeeeease update soon. I think Scott and Katrina is my fav with Nik and Dom coming in a close 2nd. I found myself laughing out loud at this one. Thoroughly enjoyed :-)
I'm so hooked on this story that I was trying to read it from my cell phone in the airport. I can't wait to read the next part. I would like to read something with Ramon and Nicole. I do hope they get together
good chapter..i loved the way Nik acted when he realized he loved her...she's annoying me though. She's acting so damn wishy washy about everything and her conversations with herself are kinda stupid..she is just so out of touch with her own feelings which is wierd given her being a therapist. Hope she gets it straight next chapter.
Jade and James are freaks, the office scene with Nik and James was hilarious; he almost told on himself LOL
Omg i would've told nik, yes i love u, take me right here baby! Lol
I'm done with her for now. Most of us have daddy and mommy issues but damn! She's a therapist for fuck's sake. Where's her self-evaluation ?