by Thrognar
I like your writing style and I enjoyed your story, so thanks for your time and imagination.
A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff. Your setup was excellent, but the transition needed a lot more of a build-up for it to be erotic. The situation you created was believable, but his mother proceeding as she did was not. That made me lose interest as there was no further character development.
The excitement in these stories concerns the boundaries being crossed and how the characters react. The physical aspect then adds to the story.
I write this in hope it aids the development of your future output.
Yes, so well written and got me very aroused. It great to read a hot mother-son sex story. The details made the difference and having a good dialog between them. Yes, hopefully, Mom will keep sucking and fucking him even after she teaches him everything he needs to know. Chris will keep screwing her well and hard; they will keep it up hopefully and enjoy ! Thank you. Please write more.
Well you should hold on,when you read this one.
Mom shows her boy,how to make a woman happy.
And herself at the same time..
VERY GOOD READ.....THANK YOU
ps. Moms been dickless for the last 7 years.
Brief but HOT story.
Would be interested to see if psychiatrist neighbor joins the fun...
Going to read your other stories now. Thanks for writing this one.
Great story, really enjoyed reading it.came twice during your story. Would like another chapter.
What a fantastic story! Loved it, five stars and favorited!
I really enjoyed this story it was a great read thou like someone else has commented you got to the incest a little bit quickly next time a little seduction is needed but really good after that.
The only area was the transition from getting advice on how to talk with her son to just spreading her legs. That change could be explained better. But overall a far superior handling dialogue, I bought it.
What a loving mother to teach her son the pleasure of the incest orgasm. The loving mother has spread her thighs and allowed her son to mount her giving her son the ultimate pleasure of seeing his mother rythe in orgasm as he unloads his seed exactly where it belongs. I hope these two loads are just the beginning and ultimately the son is jerking his load onto his mothers heavily pregnant belly
Interesting story and well done but as others have said the leap from talking to her friend and sex was too quick.
that got my cock dripping. ..I grew up having sex with my mom and I loved it.
very very fucking hot!β¦ Just sitting here reading this, and waiting on mommy to come home after visiting her dadβ¦ Can't waitβ¦β¦ For her to cum Home to mommy's baby boyβ¦β¦
I agree with anonymous. A loving mother indeed, spreading her legs and letting her son feast on her pussy
Excellent story, you really do have the knack for getting it right. Wish I had had a mother like that! Maybe in my next life.