All Comments on 'Let's Do It'

Great story! I'd like to see my large breasted teasing sis take this abuse. I would love to rape her and then share her.

i hated it an ass hole must have written this story

probably written by a 12 year old

This sucked, really sucked. I was expecting something way different and I got some unaccomplished wimpy assholes dream come true of fucking his sister. The sister was obviously better than her brother( she was in college, probably better looking, and dominate) she should have been the one fucking him! It would have been great to read about the brother having his last shred of dignity ripped away from him by his more successful sister.

34D is a bigger cup size than 36D.

I mean how.

This reads like the fantasy of a 12-year-old 7th grader written down on a piece of paper while trying to masturbate for the first time ever. Little boys should wait until they have experienced sex before they try and write about it, lol!

Numerous grammatical mistakes. Needs more believable detail. Also, add a variety of sentence lengths and structure. Boring. Work on your ending lol