All Comments on 'Letter from New Orleans'

I love this story I hope you add more chapters to it.

Love how they tentatively start into their special relationship. Though, after the brilliant witnessed beating scene (Sagesse-Moineau) story somehow looses focus. My first impression was it could do without the repeated pre-scient hints of things to come later. Maybe its good to keep 'em on as a contrasting technique (start vs present) but they stand out a bit much compared to other plot line in last part of story. Subsequent events feel a bit rushed to me, could benefit from more color. Especially, the first carpet munching by Moineau that marks an important second step into their relationship. Then those would balance better with the pre-scient hints. Those might be also intended to be reminders of the letter format as a plot frame and, on a second thought, might be worth keeping.

Am I totally off? How do others see it?

Anyway, thanks for sharing and please do continue this plot line.