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Though entitled 'Letter to Patricia', this does not really follow the format of a letter. It feels an awful lot like a confession, which would be somewhat appropriate, really. I was amused by your use of the word 'come' in place of 'cum', I don't know if that is perhaps a word you are uncomfortable with, or what... It has been one I've become particularly familiar with for reading erotica. At any length, I enjoyed this. It was quirky, unique, and I loved how the general feel was.. more mature, older and this leads to it feeling particularly naughty for me. And the language you use makes me feel homesick for Australia (noted your location in your biography). I don't know why but Canada feels less immersed in British culture than back home.

Dearest Graham, I so wish this had really been us. I miss you, my darling man, so very much. I hope you are well and quite happy.

With thoughts of you,

Patricia

You really deserve whatever you get.