All Comments on 'Letting My Wife Cut Loose Ch. 02'

This story belongs in the 'non-consent/reluctance' category, in my opinion. Despite fantasy land and how chapter one began, in this chapter we find out that Beth has been drugged and Dave is restrained, so neither is consenting to what happens at the 'club' (it is rape, pure and simple). I predict that in chapter three, we will either find out the proceedings are taped and the couple is "owned" by the 'dominant' club owner/executive who lured them into the "white cave" due to threats of blackmail, or possibly Beth will have been so turned on by the 9" cock that raped her, she will tell Dave she needs more. This formula is not original and I'm disappointed that authors are unable or unwilling to write something more original and more interesting. Will Dave grow some balls? I suppose being handcuffed takes the fight out of a person, but once released how about something exciting, like revenge? I can't believe any jury would convict a man for that, after being forced to watch his wife being raped . . .

I agree with vulcan this is nonconsent but nice try to save the story!

Go away, you are dragging the site even lower that it is currently by submitting this winp shit. Your writing is not erotic but then it would be too much to expect from you in any case

Your scores for your stories are abysmal but still you persist, albeit for the minute following that you have. Other than that I can only say “ CRAP like all your other submissions”

Stupid garbage.

This is so bad it can't even interest you!!

please continue from his point of view

the club owners ...id worry as id burn their house down with them in it....they drugged her ...id wait till they were there dave included drug them as they did her then force them to watch as i poured a mixture of soap n gasoline on them and all around that place of business ...id have then open there safe and give me every dime in it also ...if they had videos id take them to sell also for whatever i could get out of that ...as for them id let them watch the match i lit that would slowly burn them to a crisp...theyd have as much fun as i did watching what they did to my wife..i wonder if they would think this was as hot as what they made me watch...oh well ( in case you dont know the mixture i said is like a napalm )...id say they would be very hot very fast...i just wonder if theyll cum from this action...oh well time will tell ...thing is it wont be much time ...as for police most would figure with a place like this that good riddance to bad rubbish ...i dont think theyd look to hard they might just figure it was a bad business transaction...now give us his revenge please ...your version ...i like mine also

The problem with this type of story is that the author does not think that there could be consequences for the actions of people who drug others. A club like this would last 1 day in reality. One couple going to the cops after they where released would be all it would take to shut the place down. Thats true any time drugs are used to perform what amounts to a rape. This type of story just isn't real certainly not erotic.

Although I'm not a big fan of non consent it's not a bad story.

Totally humiliating and repulsive piece of crap. With a little luck this writer will do us all a favor and leap off a bridge into heavy traffic.

When people have to do these things against their will, this is NOT erotic. This is just crap! Nothing good will come of these actions...

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Must be a sick woman writer or a self cuck into male humiliation as no one but weak wimps and hurt women would degrade as was done here.<P>

The .009% into self disrespect are like the writer, self cuckolds who commented positively. Jaded, numb addicts on their way further down.<P>

What really sucks is the wasted talent. Get some help sicko.

this is a stupid story that is not erotic, or any fucking thing else, only thing i feel after reading this story is disgust. prob one of worst ive read on literotica

You need to go to your local l i b r a r y (I'm typing it slowly so that you can follow) and look up the meaning of EROTICA because you don't have the faintest idea of what it means

Your momma told you what would happen if you left school in grade three and now you see where you ended up - a laughing stock on Literotica which is one of the worst erotica sites. For you to get zero's here means that your writing is REALLY CRAP. Try looking for some Adult Basic Education classes, Lord knows you need them badly

pisspoor story

These four chapters are really superb. Very Hot! Thanks for continuing and ignoring the idiots.

I wish my wife would do that!

Writer is a fucking loser for trying to say this is a Loving Wife story. Total waste

I'm sure it's fine... it's just just bad advertizing

I don't like it at all!

Damn! I would love to see my in Beth's situation. I have seen my wife being fucked in many threesomes but watching her fuck on stage in front of hundreds would be the ultimate.

The story mirrors some of my wildest fantasies.

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