All Comments on 'Levirate Customs'

And if you now explain to me why you are posting your story on "LW"? BDSM, incest, okay, but why here? 1*!!!

Wrong Section!

I'm wondering where you got the idea that people who don't go to college and rack up huge debt that takes them until retirement to pay off are going to, as you put it, live in a shitty two bedroom apt with other people? How ignorant. I can name a dozen professions off the top of my head that pay far better than most college graduate jobs. You've been duped, stop drinking the kool-aid.

Absolutely despicable. This man was one of the most evil characters I have ever read about on Lit.com.

Never mind that the twisted women seemed thankful for his depredations, they are slaves and have had their humanity stolen. It reaches a low point when he demands that they obliterate all memory of his own deceased brother. Puke!

Wrong category

I gave it 4 stars. This means I like it. I lied.

The quality of writing, absolutely first class. A LOT of writers on here should learn from it.

The subject matter was not at all to my taste, so I didn't get very far into the story.

That's OK. We're allowed to have different tastes and I'm sure there is a market for this stuff.

Just awful.

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For a guy that this was a total surprise, he seems to have some definite ideas.

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It seems off. SHE'S the one submitting herself, yet seems reluctant, and he seems to be unnecessarily cruel for someone new to dominance.

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"You can keep one photo of him if you want; everything else associated with him goes in the trash." - That seems extreme, especially considering that he was his brother. At worst they should simply be boxed up and stored in the attic or something. At best they should be kept in a back room if there's one available.

Wow! Unique. Please continue this story.

BDSM, fetish, non-con. All more viable categories for this ridiculous garbage. Hell you even worked incest into this mess. Complete waste of time.

Clever and well written structurally. Not a fan of the BDSM scene so didnt make it all the way thru

Well written with a lot of complex psychological plot lines, revealing a twisted set of characters. Like many not my cup of tea but executed with precision. To chime in with some others, this is not a LW story but a BDSM story. I would disagree with some that claim it also should have a non-consent tag as you explained in the beginning this is what the women wanted. 4*

Not sure you should aim your ass at Literorica after taking extra strength X-Lax.

None of your tags indicate any thing relating to a Loving Wife.

As other said: AWFUL! 1* (where are the very negative ratings when we need them?)

So it may be a great example of a story for whatever category it is supposed to be in, but as a Loving Wives story it is tedious and stupid. But thanks for the effort.

I gave it a 5 and I don't generally do that. I liked it a lot. There were a couple of things that didn't hit just right. Making Carol trash all of brothers stuff. I looked at it that he thought he needed a clean slate and keeping the stuff was just an distraction.

There’s a difference between stiff discipline and all out abuse and this ‘owner’ was clearly abusive and overly cruel . To cane a woman with ‘everything you’ve got’ is way over the line, and unless it’s a form of piss play making your sub piss herself from pain is severely cruel . Dom/sub BD/SM is supposed to be fun for all involved , there is no room for cruel abusive doms , the only recourse would be to force him into a role reversal and then treat him to an even crueler punishment and give him a seven course meal of his own punishment !

Page 2 and my thought was "AWFUL".

Stopped reading on that page.

I hate domination, never is my think.

I think Ukrainians will agree with me.

Dana and the asshole having sex is INCEST.

Nope, not my thing again.

1*.

Needs another, maybe more conventional. Carol gave him her heart. They both should encourage Dana to drop that life, get an education,get married and have a family. Now that Carol has given him her heart, maybe she should give him another gift, one that takes 9 months to receive. After conceiving, she should tell him she was wrong at first, and tell him she loves him and is proudly having his child.

What a nonsense…

Load of crap