All Comments on 'Lewd Futanari Succubus Ch. 59'

I really loved this story up until this tournament arc. It's still got a lot of potential, but all the numbered contestants and it's being bout after bout, I think it would have been better to take a break to finish the chapter, release the whole tournament as one very long episode then return to the regular length afterwards

Could you move the story on from this tournament nonsense please. I almost thought this story had potential before the tournament, but this is...

Indeed, I've heard many times that this tournament arc is the worst thing to ever be put to paper. If I had an editor, they'd have some words to say to me. I'll take it as a learning experience.

The only good thing I can tell you is that the tournament part is coming to and end.

I like the tournament arc. It adds to the depth of the story and just sex. That's why I enjoy your writing please don't stop. This is your writing and be proud of it! I would love to read even more.

Eh, forget what the whiners say. Plenty of good stories have tournament arcs, and it's not like there isn't some interesting stuff going on. The story's actually been a little light on combat until now, but I am looking forward to seeing Beatrice herself get involved again.