All Comments on 'Lexi Classified Ch. 00'

WHAT IS THE RESULT?

Sooooo. There was no real incestuous relationship.

Your story has way to many gaps.

Your characters have no depth or real story line.

You quickly introduced a character "Sheila" and then ended her story with no resolution.

If I were to grade this story I would give it a D. Go back and write it again.

Do not write second chapter.. Go back and rewrite this chapter.

It is intended to be a prelude to subsequent chapters.

Yes he fingered her and touched her tits before so there is incest in this, you don't have to fuck for their to be incest. You said her breasts were fully devolved before she came to him, couldn't be, she came to live there at 13 she's not done now. How does falling on a sneaker break you Hyman? It's not easy to break or no one would be a virgin by the time they hit their teens. And you are a virgin even without a hyman take a dick to not be. Think went overboard on how drunk and violent the dad is. Why would she still be there no matter how prude the mom is? She scared of her own violent father. And please don't do this story where she is 50 and he is over 70 and. Ow they start something.

This was confusing.

Why is it here?

Why was this written?

This was nust getting there, please finish.

The sneaker I was wearing landed just so, tearing my hymen as it was trapped under me when I fell. And yeah, unlike most twats that I went to school with at 13, my tits were fully grown. I was early.

I think it's fucking hot. Waiting on my thrusting dildo to come in. I'm gonna imagine it's my daddy fucking me.