All Comments on 'Lexi's Legend Continues Pt. 01'

Love it thank you. More please these two are hot.

Very nice, this is so lovely! Hope to see more.

Great take! Would like to read more.

More of less caught the spirit of the original. Curious to see more.

Unfortunately, this was obviously not Xarth. The reason his original story was so hot was the build-up. It was enticing and sexy because it built up. That being said, your continuation is hot in a different manner. GOOD JOB.

But as someone else pointed out, what made the original awesome was the buildup. Any sequel was bound to be a bit of a letdown.

I am really enjoying what you are doing.The writing style is

different but, really has been a fun read. I can't wait for the next part.keep up the great work. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here .

i am impressed. Lexi would be proud. keep it up.

Just love this and Lexi

Very hot 🔥

Well done! Very Hot! A wonderfully enjoyable read. I think you did well to continue Xarth's original story from where he left Lexi and Aiden. Definitely 5 stars.

You can still feel that brother-sister playfulness between them and her bratty attitude comes through often, though it seems not as strong as in the original, thankfully. But they really do love each other. Needs more passionate kissing I think and maybe tone down Lexi a little (I still think she's a bit too snippy at times) and make Aiden a bit more caring as he does come off at times as a bit insensitive. Obviously the chapters are already out so whatever they are won't change; just my thoughts.

I loved that bit when she was saying something like "so I'm just your cum-dumpster now dweeb?" I think she was joking of course, but it was still pretty funny. Also, "no-sperm-left-behind" was hilarious. More women need to get on board with that program ;)