by LoveGranted
Great follow-up to Xarth's original story. You've delved more into Aiden's and Lexie's minds than Xarth did, Lex's especially. Though the writing style is different, (it should be, really), I think you've done exceptionally well in keeping with the spirit of these two's romance. Good job.
Oh man this is so wholesome. I really like your writing and hope to see more!
The part when lexi was crying really pulled at my heart strings. which I would never thought possible from a story on this site. I know how she feels when it comes to something you love doing so much comes to an end . The way Aiden takes care of herreally say something about the love he has for her. I can't want to see where this goes when their parents leave for their trip.PleaseI keep it up. I am loving the story so far. The anticipation from the original was great but, their secret craving of one another around the oblivious people around them is really hot.
Damn that was beautiful and emotional. Almost got me crying. I suspect there's more to her sadness than meets the eye, and I hope this isn't a setup for some kind of breakup. I think Aiden should have stayed with her until she fell asleep then left. They need to be together forever! It's not really a legend if they don't remain so, after all.