All Comments on 'Lexi's Quest Ch. 05'

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whatshername86 over 6 years ago

Very exciting visual

It was as if I were experiencing the dual machine at the same time. Very stimulating!! Are we going to hear more about Lexi's exploits? Can't wait for your next story.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Nailed it again!

Another great story and I can't wait to hear what happens with Lex and Tina on the dual machine! Also looking forward to when Lexi meets Lee and we see what she's like when her partner isn't mechanical!

Great job as always, can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

Anonymousover 6 years ago

HOT!!!

Great series! *****

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