All Comments on 'Lexxy Baby Pt. 02'

Different than the usual offerings from javmor79, but the characters are developing nicely. Looking forward to more.

Looks like there's some good mileage in this story.

Take it out of first and give it some gas.. don't be so obsessed with listening to yourself write.

Don't listen to those pushing for more action too soon. Character development separates the bad stories from the great ones and so far, this is great. Appreciate you and looking forward to the next chapter.

It is very well written and a nice build up to what is to come. Nice development of the Characters as well. Can not wait for the next installment.

I agree with Dirk...take your time. I like the direction that it's going and the character development is great

Lovin' it and looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks

Fun story and it has me hooked.

She doesn't know Star Wars?!?!!??!!!!???!!!?

Come on!!! LoL!

That will be fine by me. Going further might be a let-down. Or it might be great. We'll have to wait and see.

We have just been subjected to the longest ever description of a traditional family lunch posted on Literotica. Key to the story.

Eventually, our author had the equivalence between the insecurities of his male and female characters showing through, as both made their confessions. Not a bad base on which to build a relationship.

Lue

You’re a very skilled writer. You’ve fleshed out your characters wonderfully and they’re developing gracefully under your pen (lol, keyboard). Your writing reminds me of Soular (I think that’s her handle) she wrote “Damn dress” and “Seven days”. The writing style is similar but with enough different to tell you apart. I look forward to reading more.

Not knowing about Star Wars during this time...HERESY!

no seriously, this chapter was great, I’m looking forward to seeing how this develops!

Great characters, great depth to your story.

There's something nice here!