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I loved it. You definitely need to include Becca in the next chapter so Karen can satisfy both her mistresses. Karen also needs to shave her pussy and fuck what her husband might say! Five stars and a favorite point!

Please continue this story it is very sensuous and I really like the romantic side of it also.

Please continue this great story me and my wife pleasure each other while we read them.

Please keep it going. would love to see how Becca treat her mommy and how much mommy loves it,

That said. Cunt cum. Pussy pleaser. Eager slut. Yep, it is that time of the week. Time for an SSL story. And to think, this is one of the better ones.

You can't really tease all those things and then not deliver on them. That would be wickedly naughty of you, and not in a good way.

Great read either way.

I'm interested to see how far the rabbit hole goes. Please give us more

Loved this story, hope that wasn’t a tease at the end and the story continues with the “team” making more and varied conquests.

...filled with cunt-juice candy canes and plenty of peach (instead of pumpkin) pie. Really enjoyed the fun twists in the story. The candy canes were great, Raygon using the mistletoe to kiss Rebecca's mom was terrific, and best of all...Raygon having feelings of love toward Rebecca (and wanting Rebecca to help with future seductions). Definitely I'd love to read about these tremendous characters, should you choose to write any sequels. :)

Well, Jasmine another brilliant start to one of your great series, look you must continue with ALL of the possibilities especially where the God-bother gets put in his place.

Very well done! Especially giving Raygon feelings of vulnerbility and allowing her to express them to her pet, Becca. Great. Now, bring on the ‘team’ conquets as they journey through the halls of the school, church, etc.; call them “Raygon’s Angels”.

I most definitely definitely love your story💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖 perfect like all of your fantabulous story💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 more please

There really is no other writer like you. I"m in constant state of arousal (maybe that's not strong enough!) when I read your stories and you now have me like that dog, salivating when I see you have a new story. PLEASE explore all those possibilities! They sound great!

This is a great story ad yo must continue it 5 stars

Great story! I loved the mix of dominance and femininity. Mother daughter is always a great story with me, but the way you insert the third person who also is vulnerable makes all the characters very appealing. Please keep writing! Perhaps spend some time to write about the dynamics between the Mother Daughter and Raygon.

There was no need to ask those questions at the conclusion, Jasmine! You know it was disingenuous because you know your story is screaming, "Sequel!" But, to accede to your request, yes, yes there need to be more chapters in this series. And I leave it to you to choose how to continue it. Any or all of the options listed or even others will be well-received and happily read by your readers. Well done. Very erotic. Five stars. Thank you.

!!!!!!!!!!🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Please continue this story it is hot

As always an outstanding job. Dimensional characters and seduction 5 stars.

Even though I'm a bi CD married husband, I truly enjoyed this story. I don't usually read or watch that much lesbian porn anymore (I'm more into men right now) but this really turned me on. I'm especially looking forward to reading about Rebecca and her Mistress Raygon walking hand-in-hand at school letting everyone know that they are now lesbian lovers. It makes me want to walk out in public hand-in-hand with one of my male lovers and refer to him as my "boyfriend". Coming out to everyone (including my wife) is my dream.

Please continue. I can't wait to read about the next sexy chapters. I also must tell you that I love reading literotica from female writers. You really know how to tell a horny story. Keep up the great writing.

This was a hot, as in HOT story. I wish you put more time in to stories like this one than the last story you published here which seem to be an outline you put enough work in to be passable as a story but left us wanting more. This story through shows what you can do when you don't rush it. Because this was hot and sexy along with breaking your mold. A solid 10 out of 10 here on this one through.

So hot and sexy!

excellent story, it would be very exciting for Rebeca to fuck Karen's ass the first time

I love your work and have saved as one of my favourite authors. More!!! More!!! More!!!

What a wonderful, sweet, loving story. I hope you do continue it and show us how happy they all become. Thanks!

Love your stories. Please feel free to continue this story.

Can't wait

Maybe they can show the preacher how to be a better lover

Yes more of this.

Another masterpiece! My favorite type of story that you write, simply remarkable. Jasmine, you are my favorite writer and I read your stories over and over. No writer in the business anywhere can write a story this exciting.

Wonderful. Brilliant!

You could have the mother be ordered to be the pet of the daughter and then, a different day, a switch where the daughter must be the pet of the mother and each of them feeling guiltily empowered when in control.

Then maybe another mother-daughter set coming across things in the back yard, or, better, in church. They don't know what to do and "need to know more" before any damaging outing so Karen and Rebecca have time to get this new mother-daughter team, forewarned but reluctantly curious, under their control. Who you gonna call? Raygon!

Your admirer, Jordan Church

More, More, More. This is an incredible start but there must be more. And maybe a flashback to the coach giving in as the cheerleaders stand feet away, that would be awesome !

Have Karen and Rebecca blindfolded and reveal Karen is licking Rebeccas pantyhose covered pussy.

Please continue this story. It was totally worth reading. Very enjoyable. As usual, your stories do not disappoint.

SB

Oh yes, please continue the story. We need answers to those questions! Thank you!

great writing, and so fun.

Great story and can't wait for this story to continue.

Please carry on with this story

You're stories never fail to produce a satisfying orgasm.

Jasmine I would love to see where this story goes. I love your stories so please please continue this one

Fucking is generally a good thing, but fucking somebody you love and kissing her and telling her how you feel is magical. I do hope you'll share more stories of these women and how their love grows and how they share it. I'm so glad it's not just a domme/sub story.

I love you, Jasmine.

Thanks from both my wife & I for another great story...but then that's not a surprise for us is it??? Hope you find the time to develop this one since following the two of them as they work through Rebeca's mother, teachers, other students...and their moms, would give you a whole series of stories to lead us down. But even if you don't take this one forward, no doubt you'll have other great ones for us...thanks from both of us!

You must continue this story.

Please carry on and get the daughter involved!!

Please keep it going

I really enjoyed this story. You need to continue with the daughter getting involved with Mom.

You can't do this to us, it's intolerable.... I NEED to know ALL of the options you listed.... PLEASE....Please..... please...

Please

Please continue this series. So many dirty directions you can take.

Please carry on this is great and has so many possible stories going forward. Love to see the girls take Ms Walker as their pet!!!

I loved this story, as i love all of your stories. Please keep going with it

Love your stories and this was both hot and sweet at the same time!

Please continue! 🤗

Another winner Jasmine!!!! Love your stories, part 2 would be awesome!!Thanks writing these wonderfully entertaining short stories. Your my favorite writer!

Why did literotica remove or delete my comment? I really enjoyed the story and basically that's what was written!

Good story loved the characters and the build up. This story was of more quality tan a few of your more recent ones - glad to see you back on track with some HOT stories again.

Jasmine,

You write the most amazing stories as well as series of stories. Very much looking forward to reading the continued mind blowing adventures of this trio. You have such a fertile imagination.

Thanks Jazz

The details are superb. The language is fabulous. The story is erotic and dirty (super-hot). I leave the next chapter to you... YOU are the very best in the business. (please don't have Karen shave her bush).

Love You,

Jack Auff x o

This is one of the best submission story I've read. You need to continue with more you have so many roads you can take this. Have Rebecca as your pet and apprentice, keep her as your girlfriend. How will we know when you write more?

Thanks for this fabulous story Jasmine, once again you know on which buttons to push on. Simply fantastic.

Enjoyed it, but found the opening lists on the first page to be off-putting. By the end of the second one, I was more curious what it would take for someone to turn Raygon into their pet than what Raygon would do to get other pets...

YES YES AND YES

as with the majority of your stories this was very well written, sexy and entertaining

Please continue this tale. I so look forward to the next chapter. - G.

Normally if a story is over 2 or 3 pages i find myself "saving" it for later... Until this one i read every word and have been soaked from the very beginning... I beg of you to continue the saga i am a dedicated fan and you are the mistress of my juices and squirting, screaming, incredibly satisfying orgasams.

All of them!

All of the prospective storylines sound good to me.

A mixture between them taking over the school together and Karen submitting to her daughter sounds hot.

Yes to all the above. This is only the beginning of a great series!

YES I would love for you to continue with this series can't wait to read them as well AWESOME job .....what's next on you story list?

-when Raygon and her girlfriend turn their high school society on its ear?

-When Karen learns what Raygon meant when she called her 'our' pet?

-When Minister Marte learns of his daughter scandalously coming out as a sinner and solidly puts his foot down, only to be confronted by three determined women, two of them technically mutinous?

-When the team of Raygon and Rebecca (and Karen?) begin their seduction campaign? -When the (outwardly) straitlaced and strict (but fair) Mrs. Walker sees her best student Rebecca become her (temporary) worst nightmare shortly before the team of Becca and Raygon prove to be her sexual salvation?

-When Mommy discovers she is also the pet of her daughter.

These could be explored

Yes - we want more, please ! The daughter mistress and submissive mom is a great chapter 2 - Chapter 1 should only be the beginning....

You did such a great job on the story, we ll are waiting to read the rest of the life of mother and daughter and the extreams they are willing to go through. I'm sure the next section will be as exciting as the first

I'm not usually a big fan of coercion but I could see an exception for self-righteous pricks. Possibly the minister might be taught the joys of pussy eating. Maybe the girls even have a bi friend who could provide a freshly filled one for his delight. Since he doesn't have the same receptacle the girls were using for the strap-on, maybe he could learn the joys of anal?

Please, you must continue and finish this horny story, with Rebecca as a pet of Raygon and her daughter.

But seriously, I love this story. I find someone who is slowly betraying their values because of a twisted desire awaken very interesting.

Really hoping you do a Chapter 2 with a good scene between the daughter and mother. The setting is excellent (love the Church mom thing). Please more :)

Would love to hear more about Karen and Rebecca. Then the three of them "teaching the Preacher!"

No, she asks do we want to read more, she gives suggestions, then she says it can be left to our imaginations. And most people responded they wanted more. Given the choice she put out there, people CHOSE to ask for more.

Of course as always, she never delivers. She does write a nice story. No question of that. But she frequently asks, just like here, would you like to hear about these additions, then she never returns. I swear she has fucking ADHD. She needs to be on meds so she'll stop chasing squirrels and butterflies and finish a fucking story.

My suggestion? Yes, to turning Karen into their pet, announcing their love at school, seducing other girls and women, and telling dad fuck off. But I would add Raygon finding out her own mom is not the fuddy fuddy she thinks she is, when she turns Raygon into her own pet. Bam!

yes carry on with all the suggestions you have out lined for this story plus may add the mothers sister and rebbecca`s best friend into their pets as well

Fantastic story! Perfect build up and seduction. Please continue the story! It’s been too long.

Awesome story, loved it! This deserves to be continued!

this def needs to continue. i feel like it was just really starting to kick off and then it ended. would very much love to see it continue on

Really good

Please keep writing more with this story line, it’s a very good one

If something as powerful as this can happen, can you imagine every woman actually having a taste of the "Candy Cunt Cane" wow, what a treat that would be for them and the erogenous outcum would generate massive sales. Wonderful Story, keep up the beautiful job.

Omg this is amazing please update

Oh My Fucking God!

this was a second reading for me, and it was so erotic, thank you again. i love the seductions.

That was so hot, please continue the saga all your ideas are so hot

Wish there was a series. There's a whole congregation to bring to the light! I like some of your turning church ppl stories the best.

I love all of your suggested ideas for containing this story especially future deductions.

327. Yes-Yes-Yes, a hundred times yes to all the suggestions for a continuation of the story. Really enjoyed how the girls loved each other and the mom was ade a participant. It would be a shame to let this hot stort languish as so many others have.

Absolutely awesome would definitely love to see it continued

This story as a series would be amazing!! And scorching hot!

YES..!!! Excellent story... Great ending..!!

What's the point of saying it when you didn't explore it and 2 why are you always killing the mood of stories buy using the terms slut and pet you would have some decent stories if you would just quit killing the mood

Also though comments say they liked it's just cause there scared to leave a negative response to any story they read when deep inside they honestly believe you killed the mood as well

You should write next part with training mommy

Totally unexpected turn of events with Raygon and Rebecca becoming girlfriends as well as Mistress and pet/slut. I love the use of the terms 'pet' and 'slut' as they perfectly describe the role the submissive partner plays for her Mistress.

Love your stories but always feel incomplete

Gasp!