All Comments on 'Liar'

That kind of risky story is exactly what I have been looking for!

Keep up the good work :-)

Mine was random as hell, but it didn't go that smoothly.

Well told. Simple, teenage language. The guy was a bastard, & I always have trouble relating to those kind of creeps. But I think you let the reader judge for themselves - well done.

I liked the twist at the end with the best friend still a virgin!

That Old Bastard Really Knew How To Get In Your Pants

But You Took All The Risk. Getting Knocked Up Was Only

The Beginning Of Your Troubles. Your Real Problem Was

Getting AIDS

...from the MYFIRSTTIME website.

As a fantasy... hot. If this happened in real life, to anyone who actually experiences this.. it's sexual grooming and rape, please get help.