All Comments on 'Liar, Liar'

by DrHenderson

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Laura1234Laura1234over 3 years ago
I love this. And his Mom too:)

This was a crazy story! Enjoyable as always from you dr Henderson but this guy! How did he stand him for any time much less the extended months. Thanks for the glossary and translations - I had gotten Into googling them and ironically the ones I googled were the ones that ended up being translated right after in the story itself - maybe because those were too hard to figure out - and great to see the glossary at end to confirm if I had guessed correctly . Now I’ll know to look for it :)

Always glad to see your stories-

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

I hated Lindsay in all his forms - none of them were particularly likable. Someone who has deceit so deeply entrenched in their being(s) is always going to be a liar. I never believed anything he was telling Wir but the twist at the end was still a huge surprise. So nicely done on that. I also felt bad for Toby because I think he really liked Wir and George/Linds messed that all up too. But Jase seems like a stunner and he and Wir are soulmates. So good riddance to garbage like Lindsay! I really hope Wir would never consider getting back with him (or even a threesome) cuz it grossed me out when it seemed like he might be into that if Jase was. I hope that would never happen! Lindsay has done more than enough damage to these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wow! What a quirky ride, loved it!

Erotica_WorshiperErotica_Worshiper8 months ago

I like most of your works, but I truly hated this one.

mislaidthoughtsmislaidthoughtsabout 1 month ago

This story was such a whirlwind. I wasn't really a fan of Lindsay at first, and then he sort of grew on me. Once Jase mentioned his boyfriend who was secretive, though, I was like, damn, that's probably Linds, isn't it? This story was really unique and I think you did a great job of laying things out while still keeping things fun and surprising. I think Awhina was my favorite character. It was a nice touch showing her predictions for the future and then getting the confirmation that Wiremu and Jase were fulfilling them a year later.

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