All Comments on 'Liberated by the Pen Ch. 04'

Extraordinary as the previous parts.

I get more and more the gut feeling that this can only end in a most tragic way. Til death do us part one way or another but my money is Amelia who will strangle Gabe in his sleep one day.

I hope she kills him

no matter what, team amelia safe and sound by the end, always

I think it’s the leather collar. I want an HEA for them but don’t see how it’s possible :(

Am I the only one who wants them together at the end?

I vote for them staying together as well

I absolutely do not want them together. I'm hoping it's the leather collar.

I think it's the leather collar. The writer suggests it in the last few paragraphs. I want Gabe to get his.

EssEssCeh - Thanks again for the complimentary words. We'll have to see what befalls Amelia and Gabe

Anon - I'm not sure if plans are in the works for such a violent ending.

sluttyinprogress - I"m also partial to team Amelia. I for sure thought there might be one or two readers who would support Gabe given his backstory

Joymac - The answer to whether it's the leather collar or not is answered in the next chapter

Anon - you're one of a few who wants them together at the end. Thanks so much for reading.

Anon - Thanks so much for reading. We'll see if Amelia and Gabe stay together

Anon- Thanks for reading. I think there are possibilities for some sort of retributive justice in the future.

Anon - Thanks for reading the work. We'll see what happens in the next chapter. I've already submitted it so it should be posted at some point in the future.

LEATHER COLLAR OR IM SUING!! tbh her killing him is the only satisfactory ending. He's a fucking psychopath, no amount of intense orgasms or cute green eyes would win a sane woman over. I normally root for the "kidnapper" but only if they show the capacity to be a human being. He's just a monster. Also if he really loved her, he would offer her a normal relationship, just to be with her, instead of always having to chase his weird kinks and power trips