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slimvslimvover 5 years ago
Twists, Turns and Tension

Nice addition to your wonderful story, Rvon. For any reader who sees this story and is thinking about reading it based on the comments, my advice is to start at the beginning because it will be time well spent.

This is a tremendous story steeped in the eroticism of a young man's desire and fascination for his old high school librarian. The young man doesn't really make an appearance in this chapter, but that's okay because he's waiting in the wings.

The character development is patient, loving and interesting. Rvon is doing a great job at giving them each equal time. Their motivations are different and unique but they all have Angelique in common.

If Rvon has the drive to continue this story, then I'm in for the long haul. This story can go so many places and I want the author to take me to all of them!

-slimv

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