All Comments on 'Librarian Finds Long Overdue Love Ch. 17'

Rvon, you really outdid yourself with this chapter. 17 Chapters and still going strong! And because this was the 17th chapter, it did require the long, informative, but intriguing story line refresher to jump start the reader's memory of the previous 16 chapters.

I found this chapter very engaging. I think your boot fetish fans will love it. Your age-gap fetish fans should be satisfied. You're smoking fetish fans will be left wanting more. Yes, young Tom does have questions about where his relationship with the older librarian is going. He's paranoid about her commitment. He wonders whether he is Angelina's boy toy or boyfriend. I can't say for certain if Tom gets the answer to his question, but he had a wild ride!

The shopping excursion was enjoyable, which is a compliment to the author, because who loves shopping? However, Angelina's purchases set the tone and led up to fireworks at the end of the chapter.

The last part of this chapter was very hot, very erotic, and very well written.

Great job!

slimv