All Comments on 'Librarian Finds Long Overdue Love Ch. 20'

Well done, Rvon. You covered a lot of ground in this chapter. Sharon was an excellent lesbian predator. But she also knew when to stop and retreat. So, Angelina is looking for more than a continuous series of one night stands with her boy toy? The final scene set a stage for future chapters. Tom seems more than willing to be everything Angelina needs. But does Angelina have what it takes to be wife material? Her character flaws are out in the open. Yet, the couple seems willing to take those flaws on. Monogamy will be on the menu in later chapters as Angelina's dalliance with the stripper can't be hidden forever. Either guilt or loose lips will spill the stripper beans.

Thanks to all who read, as well as rate. But I can never guess why certain stories rate in the 3s or 4s. If those who rate could take the time to comment what they based their grade on it would be much appreciated. I want to learn what can do better