All Comments on 'Librarian Finds Long Overdue Love Ch. 21'

Wow! That was an incredible chapter, Rvon! I enjoyed and appreciated everything about it. You did a terrific job describing the scenery, the events, and the people. I felt what they felt. Damn, that Angelina is a bitch and a tart. It could have been Sinatra himself, but I couldn't help but feel that Angelina still harbors an appreciation for men older than her- aka Harry Seymour.

I liked how you had Tom mentally confront Angelina's age after she passed out during the concert. Oedipus or whatever, the love starved dude just proposed to a woman who is old enough to be his mother. And of course, I'd enjoy seeing that concept explored.

The ending? Well you left it in good form.