All Comments on 'Librarian Finds Long Overdue Love Ch. 24'

Thanks for this long awaited chapter, Rvon. I wish Angelina had taken a fist to the face instead of fainting, because I would have enjoyed her having to explain the bruise on her face to Tom.

Very detailed. Well thought out. Beautifully written. This chapter stays in tandem with the previous 23 chapters. Angelina is certainly an exquisite but bitchy older woman. And as a man who worships older women who smoke, I understand Tom's attraction to her. But damn! She's too hot to handle. She's prepared to go up in flames and ignite anyone standing close by.

I was excited to see Elaine and her daughter, Lisa, smoking Angelina's Virginia Slims. Lisa is probably not the type to make a habit of it, but I'm hoping that Elaine, like Tom's mother, slips back into the habit.