All Comments on 'Licking Santa's Problem'

Great imagination and erotic enough to keep reading until the blissful end. Good story, I look forward to your next submission.

this is the sexiest christmas story i've ever read. i'd love to be santa this year! thanks for bringing on one of the best orgasms ever. now back for more.

Great idea -- and a well-written and hot story! I particularly liked the scene of Santa in Mrs. Claus's office... something about Santa sneaking around conjures up a neat image. Nicely done!

Another great story, sexy, funny and ver you. Thanks again!

Very creative and well written. IMO, it lends itself well to a part 2.

*(A couple things I would have changed about this - you described her body, but made a big deal about Santa fantasizing about her face. Then when Santa finally saw her face, you didn't describe it at all.

Also, if you don't have a pt. 2, I would have preferred it if you had made the sex scenes longer.

Lastly, you didn't really even hint at how she knew he was Santa, which was confusing to me.

All 3 of those suggestions are pretty minor, but I think would add to it)*

Now... where is the THIRD part of this trilogy... it's screaming to be written as much as Tori is for Santa.

:D

too much build up, not enough action for me