All Comments on 'Life after Death Ch. 04'

This Horny 'ol Sailor is a sucker for a good loving, sexy story and yours is great, not just good. Keep it coming please. Ronnie W.

crack, it is going, going - over the wall! another home run!

A really loving story. It sounds very much like the way I like to make love to the wife. Almost exactly. So intimate, so tender, so loving.

Sounds like a perfect ending for the 5 of them. One happy family!

I loved it, I loved it, because the warmth and Rachael slowly breaking down his defenses so that he can show his true affection of her, make the sex act a love connection of successful sharing.

I enjoyed this story. It is truly a great story of sad times new love and romance. The sex scenes is in a true loving way. I can't wait to read more of this well written story

I enjoyed this story. It is truly a great story of sad times new love and romance. The sex scenes is in a true loving way. I can't wait to read more of this well written story

Carry on, and as good luck as your characters seem to have had finally.

And also to everyone else (from the sixties seventies, Be happy)!

John

Everything moving smoothly so far. If there

are no peppers under the dressing we will be finished

too quick!

"Suddenly she dropped your head to my shoulder...." Was there someone else in the room that I missed? I loved the story, but bad grammer really bugs me. A liitle more attention to details would make the story much nicer to read.

now we are getting places. I really enjoyed it.

Seems a bit early to be shagging, i would have expected a while to get to know each other each other. Spot that... So did I in the text, so should the author or editor when heel was heal etc. Nonetheless thank you for writing and sharing