All Comments on 'Life after Death Ch. 06'

Of course he will have doubts and guilt. That's just the way it is when you lose someone you love. Now he has to figure out how to work through the feelings and she has to figure out how to help him do it succesfully. A really great and sexy story. Ronnie W.

The problem is it isn't real. He isn't guilty of anything. He really should seek help for that. And if Rachel and the kids can't turn his mind then he has to have extra help, counseling. I don't feel he should have any trouble deciding he would like to marry Rachel. Whatever is good for the kids?

I know I never got enough sex when I was young but I doubt I could compete with this twosome even then. Amazing sex.

I thought they couldn't top the sex in chapter 5, but in this chapter so many things were done and said in a loving way. I think it is very believable for him to fuck so much like he have in these 2 chapters. We must remember he hasn't had any pussy in a long while and cum has has been stored so deep in his body, that it was about ready to come out through the pores of his skin. They may have to fuck like that for a couple months before his nuts feel normal again.

It is interesting that you should say he needs help, if you think back to the earlier chapters he has dealt with this guilt, he doesn't need to seek out professional help, he is just moving forward. This woman has turned his life around in an amazingly short period of time. She has given him back his ability to love agin and to look forward with optimism. This story is semi autobiographical, whilst the sex is expanded, the strength of emotion he feels is just how I experienced it myself. This is the first series I have ever written, so I am sure my ability as writer will grow too, but I am overwhelmed with the response I have recieved from people over this series and the other story I wrote, so thank you all for the support and chapter's 7 and 8 are written already, but are being edited as I write this. So hopefully I will submit them over the next few days.

Best wishes

Executive Gent.

I felt he was worrying far too much about Jane. I'll accept that isn't so as you mean it.

It does sound like the little ones can help him decide what he wants almost as well as Rachel can.

Little people can sometimes go straight to the heart of a problem with ease!

Really love the story. Pretty good sex, too!!

I think you're braggingheavily here. They sound, sexually, like he's 18 and she's 30. [One hell of a combination, btw]

You don't store sperm in your hollow leg, man!!

It's like sleep, A coupla really heavy nights and you're back to speed.

Very well written, it dose see a lot of this is from the heart, I think that what makes this such a good story. I will be looking foreward to the next two chapters

What can I say? Another awesome story.

Keep 'em cumming S! xo

Gotta be kidding right? And the last cum he was still able to spurt and spurt? Man your hero must have a bionic cock. Try a bit more realistic.

I appreciate your comments, but these two cannot get enough of each other at this point in the story, ofcourse they will cool down in time, but now they just need to find each other physically as often as possible. This event is representative of something that actually happened in my life, I won't apologise for writing it, and yes they are acting like teenagers, but sometimes that is what love does to you. I will never complain when a beautiful woman like Rachel wants to make love to me, especially if she has the skill as a lover to arouse me more than once.

I respect everyones comments and hope you enjoy my work, but this is my first ever series, and as I write more I will progress in both quality and content hopefully, but this story is from my heart and is based mostly on my own life experiences. So if you choose not to enjoy it or find certain areas a little far fetched. It is not my problem, I can only write what I feel and most people seem to enjoy that approach.