All Comments on 'Life Art Ch. 01: An Erotic Beginning'

WOW! Fantastic story that cries for another chapter. Or two.

There are two more stories that I published on Amazon. I’ll probably post them here eventually. They were fun to write! Thanks for reading❤️

Thank you. I very much enjoyed this story. It touched on so many fantasies.

Eva, the first thing I had to do was Follow Author and now I have to go find your one prior. You are amazing! The first time I think I have been anticipating an 02. And do show us the ones from Amazon!

I really enjoyed the way you set the story in motion, the build up, and as the characters finally came together. A most excellent beginning. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Will there be more?

I've just submitted the next chapter. Look for it soon!

What a beautiful brilliant start. Given that the story is from Lani’s point of view it’s amazing that her character is so incredibly vivid and realistic in just one chapter.

Looking forward to reading more, thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

This was utterly delightful. MORE, PLEASE.