All Comments on 'Life at Last Ch. 12'

nice ending story comes full circle

Lance,

I have enjoyed reading your story. I didn't have the time to read every one of the Chapters, but those I read, I thought they were written well.

Wishing you much success in the future.

This story was quite long and had a lot of ups and downs but it was strangely addictive because I wanted to know how things would end. For a first story submission, I found it was pretty good. My only con was the few places where things didn’t flow smoothly. Other than that, I enjoyed the journey.

Really good story, have read it more than once. I just would have liked it better without Conner being involved. It was better with just the women together.