All Comments on 'Life Changing Discovery'

There was no consistency in the characters.

another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

The story was not very believable.

. . . stupid. Enough said.

Just wanting to get close to a dick

You stupid unwashed asswipes sewer rats that come here every day looking for a sick fetish B.T.B story and get so angry when just hot wife stories are posted that most readers perfer anyway should go to fetish where you belong anyway.

Any day without a sick Burn the bitch story is always a good day here...

Thanks for so many good hot wife stories here..

I wonder what sort of story readers might enjoy? I'm thinking Westerns. How about ten or twenty of the best writers on the site get together and write Western stories? Anyone interested in reading that? Could happen. A "Writers go West" invitational? That might be something to be thankful for. Could it be? Sorry author, off topic. I couldn't get into this one. Too many writing gaffes. Randi

It is very interesting. :

The husband catches his cheating wife he divorces her and he finds a better second wife. According to many posters this life situation is FETISH. The husband enjoys his wife is fucked by sranger and the husband eats the creampies. According to posters this is not FETISH. Funny......This posters would give every groom a marriage guide during the wedding ceremon which would contain every husband must eat strange men's creampies from his wife, because this is the normal behavioral...............The high anger which they show to us they would give such marriage guide to every groom..........I do not surprised that the popularity of the marriage institute decreases among the heterosexual people.

Is this a tease for a new event? I would love that! I've read every western on the planet. Please tell me you're going to do that. I hope this goes outside loving wives and gets into some of the other types of stories. RPL

Put it in fetish.

This is simply bad...and maybe sick too...1*

Really this seems to be Fetish story; about a couple that went senile & lost morals after their children grew up & left home.

No names were changed as no one was innocent, least of all the "author"

Randi, Westerns might be very interesting though the biggest challenge would be how to avoid imposing modern idiom and mores on historical situations. "Deadwood" was a total failure in that regard.

I think you've got your categories mixed up. Btb isn't fetish, but this shit could well be.. If you're going to act all outrageous about the comments, at least get your facts straight. The only moron is you for showing us your stupidity. Aren't you ashamed.

Hey Randi, I used to love Western, read my share when I was a youngster. Maybe it was because I didn't have internet to keep me entertained. lol

I wonder who would identify with this guy?

Sure Randi bring on the Western erotica.

Wasn't long enough to prepare and explain the husband's manic mood swings.

Sorry.

sickness crawls this author.

What ugly and nonsense story ever!

The author did a very poor job on this story. In fact it seems the author has some serious gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transferred to this ugly story.

This story lacks of creativity nonsense shallow low context poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

Only for real pervert cuckolds or brain sick ones!!!

Another castrated "author" with no clue on how to keep or satisfy a woman....lol.

Neither one thing nor another. What a waste of a story. Either burn the birch or write a good cuckold story. This was neither.

Randi, I agree wholeheartedly.. After all, the Amateur Detective story genre has been done to death by the revenge/retribution crowd.

Lue

These stories get stupider everyday!

It is an epitaph for marriage and the only thing he could have done after the fact if he still wanted to screw her was divorce her and let her marry one of his stupid friends and the help that dummy screw her. No more overhead.

You did not give any thought or reference to STD's or his worry about them.

He should have made a video of the two guys DPing her, and posted it to the Net!

That I've read elsewhere.

Other than that it appears to be written by a 13 year old if it isn't stolen.

1*

Made me hot, thanks xoxoxoxox Annette

Just stupid cuck shit. I am beginning to wonder if this is all we have to look forward to. No more btb stories? I just dont understand the whole cuck shit.

A sad excuse for a story

Made you hot? Are you sure it isn't menopause?

I usually would lean toward a btb story but enjoy a reconciliation story when it calls for it. Also sometimes just a good story no matter the topic. I think and many may agree that loving wife section should have sub topics like

BTB

RECONCILIATION

CUCK

REAL LOVING WIFE STORIES

OR A COUPLE JUST MUTUALLY AGREEING TO GO SEPERATE WAYS

This would be so people could skip a story about swingers or cuck like me who really don't like or agree with the topic but does enjoy a real happy couple , reconciling story or a Btb . With my opinion aside most stories can be fun because they are just fiction at the end of it all.

They would still read the stories that they claim to hate so that they could say how much they hate them, just as they do now. It's their therapy.

Lue

And an increased desire for sex as I hit my early 60's? Well god damn, that is good news. L

How many 60 year olds have sex 3 or 4 hours a week?

Read annette's profile it explains her comment

As for luedon's comment - I admire her writing, and reflect on her comments though she seems to often discredit anon comments. I have read numerous comments by those with ''names'' whose comments indicate their need of therapy.

As for the story, I am surprised luedon had no comment about content.

Wife is raped by two deliverymen and husband's friends and she ENJOYS IT SO MUCH husband eagerly turns her into gangbang slut.

Must be new age therapy for sexual assault!

Your description of how to punctuate dialogue is very confusing. It depends also in what language you're using, and even, for english at least, what part of the world you are from. Dialogue punctuation is a classic for this, and I've come to the conclusion personally, that there is no truly correct way to do it. There are however truly incorrect ways to do it, as we so often see here in Literotica. I'm far from perfect but part of my pleasure in writing is trying to get the grammar correct, but it has to be pretty bad for it to spoil my enjoyment of other people's stories.

I write using English English (or should it be english English? As far as I can see there is no hard rule on this, though many might disagree), rather than the american version, there are however times when I feel that the American version would be more appropriate.

Story was OK.

Bull Rango wiped his dusty brow and peered down the long rail spying Joe Schvingah and Fat Kitty Lu crouched low next to the open doorway to the Pussy House Saloon. The beer was warm and stale and the girls ridden hard at the Pussy House. Clarabell knew that before she allowed nasty Schvingah and his whore wife Kitty to talk her into working in the seedy cowhand den of disease.

Bull's groin stirred at the prospect of his revenge; his enormous silver toed boot at the ready to part Joe Schvingah's puckered arse as wide as Cripes Creek. Clarabell was as worthless as sheepshit having been shanghaied into the back rooms upstairs thinking Bull was accommodating of Schvingah's perverse desires.

"Fuck that" Bull whispered as the bead on the Winchester found the weasel's pointed little head...

Yeah, Westerns... Has that ever been done here? :)

As lue says, it probably wouldn't help, since many stories title and/or description and/or author make it clear, but maybe moving tags to the top would help a little, certainly where there is no other indication of content.

In any case, reading a story where it's theme is obvious, then bitching about the theme is childish.

But you're definitely on to something there. What Randi has started should be taken to full execution. 'Cowpoke' could take on a completely new meaning.

SB, you say: "In any case, reading a story where it's theme is obvious, then bitching about the theme is childish." Would you deny people their fun? Let them enjoy their childishness while others enjoy their adultery.

And my usual plea to the undifferentiated anonymice. If you register a name or put an identifier at the foot of your comment, others can converse with you.

Lue

All of the story was setup leading to one conclusion: divorce. His every thought and feeling, all of his actions and words were of his anger and that he would NOT stand for this. The way he treated her, including calling on the others, was punishment and seem to be nothing more than to show her the marriage was dead and that it was best to part.

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Everything, and I mean everything, was evidence that her actions killed his love, that if they did fo,r some reason, not divorce, as you wrote, they would only be roommates.

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So what happens? She gives him some short, lame story, and suddenly, out of the blue, he loves her and is not only willing to share her but provide guys for here.

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Where the fuck did that come from?

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There might have been a slim chance you could have pulled it off if you hadn't written this in first person. We know his thoughts and feelings, and as I wrote, this thoughts and feelings stated he didn't love her anymore and was headed to divorce. You changed him with absolutely nothing to back up the change. There was no logical, sane reason for the change.

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You wanted a reconciliation in the worst way and you got it in the worst way, but violating everything you wrote up to that point.

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If you're going to have your characters do such a 180 without anything to back up the reversal, you should consider writing in third person. That way you might be able to mask the glaring inconsistencies.

its time to join them, TK U MLJ LV NV

If you put it to a western theme then the Montana/Wyoming Cowboys Union will complain that by wearing leather chaps it must go in fetish. OMG, can't you heteros get anything straight. (yes that was a pun)

Hubby walks in and finds wife of 30 plus years being doubled and some might think he might want to know what the hell is happening? Hubby's reactions and reasoning even after he finds out that his wife was raped seems very, very odd. Hard to rate this any higher than 1*

He should have taken photographs and called his Lawyer i.e. divorce.

I would have.

Garbage!

Just pure garbage and nonsense story.

Complete lack of creativity, low context and shallow.

You pathetic, sick, dirty mind, writing like a 🐖

I am somewhat confused since all of the authors work doesn't reach the 4-star level. The stories and style are not the best I've ever read but in my opinion an average of 4.0 would suit this author. Hencemy disbelieve in this story's score 2.56

Just had to, when right at the end, you made me laugh out loud, and then chuckle for a few minutes, when you asserted so seriously at the end of the story, that she was able to sleep without peeing. Still chuckling. Keep writing.

Pretty stoopid

part 2?

wimpy cuck shit.

Wives are monogamous. A woman who enjoys sex with several men is in no way a wife. She is by definition, a whore.

And that's how you end a happy marriage. So MC jumped to conclusions and had his wife thoroughly gang-banged by his friends under the assumption that his wife was intentionally cheating when she was actually being raped and simply enjoying the sex as a mental defense mechanism, and in the end awakens to his inner cuckold? Well I've seen better but goodness knows I've seen worse.

Wait, I don't even have to ask.

aliveinpr

My immediate thought after reading your tale was what a wasted opportunity your efforts were. I based my conclusion on the fact that your central plot around which the characters of wife and husband revolved was basically non-consensual sex engineered by an angry hubby to be foistered on his wife. The result was that schubby actually magnified the extent to which he had been cuckolded through his own actions. Then you had him going nuclear on his slut wife. OK...I could partly understand his self-richeous rage. But you then restructured his motivations so that he was OK with his wifes sluttish behaviour provided he was the one in ultimate control over how many cocks she was to satisfy and who belonged to which cock, etc. He became a virtual pimp for his wife...even after you portrayed him as having the moral highground. The result was chaos and confusion...and not in a good way.

shit, another cuckold adventure............ going to have to jump to "comments" before I read so I don't waste my time

Something is definitely wrong with the husband!

Both for that matter and you for writing the story!!!!!!!

Garbage story, nonsense plot, hopefully you get help for whatever is messing with your mind. But to critique the story, just stupid plot, made no sense and the whole discussion the wife and husband had is not realistic one bit. Like robots saying things you know humans don't say or act. The dialogue was just not up to scratch. Another writer venting his fantasies onto pages to post here as a release.

Gee, a similar situation faced me. On arriving home, found my wife in bed with one of her patients ( she is/was a dentist. I simply took a ball peen hammer to her hands. With three strikes, her career ended. After one strike, her marriage ended.

But it cost me, I was sentenced to 4 yrs but releases after 25 months. It was worth it!

A well-written tale, direct and to the point. Author also very good at written dialogue, kept a good pace throughout the story.

The opposite of "So Good". Maybe think about an outline and what the story is suppose to tell? This meandered so badly that I can't even critique it properly. Maybe try again and remeber hope is not a strategy. (see outline story) BTRH

Terrible story

Another cheating slut gets off the hook

So dumb it hurts. He calls her every name in the book. Then the writer succumbs to his inner bi self and blows up a decent story. Please writer clean the three finger’s you have had up your ass your whole miserable life. Why is it that member with no appreciable writing skills always back peddle to cuck hold crap!?