by NorthernNewEnglandGuy
The author makes it so real, like real people (characters well developed) and genuine love. Thanks for your series. Each chapter leaves the reader feeling good, feeling hope for better things.
I rated it 5* because I'm enjoying the story. Sometimes I find the telling of the great story a little wooden. Take a read of The Bar and Grill by Rehnquist who is a master at telling great stories. You have some good ideas and interesting characters. Please keep at it because your postings are well worth reading.
Great read. So far, all chapters are a story with some sex, rather than a story about sex with a bit of a story line. Absolutely love it. Thanks for a really good job of writing. Hope you have more chapters coming down the pipe.
I’m really into this story, I can hardly wait for more!!! I love that every character has their own thoughts conveyed!!!
Excellent story. The plot and characters are well developed and it is skillfully written. Thank you
Still a good and interesting story lots a thing going on and lots of lives being blended together good writing and well written.
Each chapter is well crafted and interesting. The characters are nicely developed. I love it. Keep it going and thank you