All Comments on 'Life is Sweet and Salty Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting scene. I bit too long in the preliminaries, but the ending ["middle"] wos worth the wait

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story, please continue.

Toni

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Love it. Can't wait for the rest. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wonderful read.. enticing enough for marking it favorite.

jmk_va_againjmk_va_againabout 3 years ago

Brilliant story! Very well done, and excited to see where this goes.

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