All Comments on 'Life Less Lived Ch. 07'

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gravyrug almost 5 years ago

Hrm

How long do you plan to string out the mystery of Jessica's Lover? By this time it's bloody obvious that you're trying to set it up as a plot twist, but it's just a hair toooo obvious.

WhoGivesAShit over 4 years ago

Train wreck?

Seems like it’s building to have multiple plot lines all meltdown at a single flashpoint.

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