by Connie688
Idk why but I kept expecting him to get what’s coming to him.. disappointed he didn’t.
I do agree there should be more fitting tags (nonconsent etc), but goddamn this is hot
I have fantasies about some of this humiliation besides the mental. the telling someone you love them and then calling them stupid made the hot parts less hot. I just feel that is extreme but I would love a guy that shows me off. like I said I'm mixed, I would read a hot part and right after want to stop reading. this story could have been amazing, the tag really needs to be changed to noncon or make the guy more relatable.
one word says it all,this reads like a person reading from a script...no emotional inflection at all,,dry boring detail without anything to hook me in
This is a great story make more like this please I busted 6 nuts to it.